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Re: My Master, my Lover.
I LOVE IT! I review by telling you how I, the reader, feel about the story. I give it a thousand stars! I want more, more, more! I liked the ...
Jan 24, 2009 -
Re: Twilight Fan Fiction
Very, very, very nice. Are you Stephnie Meyer, you sound a lot like her. Any way, it's clear how I thought it sounded. I never correct spelling or grammar because ...
Jan 24, 2009 -
Re: This cant be the end
I enjoyed this story, it's unique! I've never read anything like it! I did find some grammar mistakes, but I think you can correct those on your own. I'm going ...
Jan 24, 2009 -
Re: Prologue: Here Comes Goodbye
I really like this piece. Now I'm not going to go into all of the grammar things (because I didn't think I saw any and I'm really bad at it ...
Jan 24, 2009 -
Re: Secrets of the Unfaithful {1}
I loved that, but there is somethings that I need to be explained. Is Miss. Lucy and Nate's mother the same person? I didn't think that they were but that's ...
Jan 23, 2009 -
Re: A Summer To Remember-- Prologue
I liked it, but there is a few things that I'd like to let you know. At first I wasn't sure if it was a male main character, but that's ...
Jan 23, 2009 -
Re: Destination San francisco
I'd correct some of the grammar but it seems as if some one already had done that so it's no use repeating what that person already said. So I'll just ...
Jan 23, 2009 -
Re: Shoes Upon Your Feet
Here’s someone screaming about shoes, when it’s me who don’t got feet. Awesome as always, you are truly talented. I really like how you went into this story and a ...
Jan 22, 2009 -
Re: A Stupid Plan
Ha, this was so cute! I feel the same way ALL the time. I see a cute guy, try to act cool, but I'm not cool. :( Anyway, I thought ...
Jan 22, 2009 -
Re: Gentleman's Club ~ Prologue
I was so elated when you said I could read it. I felt a little bad, making you go through all that trouble, but I see that you enjoyed writing ...
Jan 22, 2009 -
Re: A Blessing and Curse.
Whoa! That is so profound. I'm not sure how you want it to sound but when you do know how, I suggest recording it and making it into a demo. ...
Jan 19, 2009 -
Re: Titleless story
I love it! I liked how it dragged me in and at first I didn't know what to expect. Really sweet, I love it and it really make me think. ...
Jan 19, 2009
